For my stories today i’m going to be talking to u about water pollution. Water pollution comes from factories and farm too. The factories blow out smoke that goes out to the public air and shouts up to the clouds. From there the clouds shot down rain to the earth where there are rivers,lakes and oceans. As it comes down to the rivers,ocean and the lakes starts to get polluted. Water pollution can get more worst than that,it then starts to suffocate and kill the animals in the earth and most of the animals wind up on land.. When it’s doing that it’s also killing the oceans,lakes and rivers too.
AS for my next paragraph i would be talking about how we can eliminate water pollution. You can be eliminated by not pouring any oil and fat into the oceans,rivers and lakes. Also it can be eliminated by not throwing any rubbish down your toilets and sinks,Also don’t throw any paint to other forms of litter down the drain,sink,toilet,ocean,lakes and rivers too. Also watch out for people that are pouring or throwing any chemicals into the bodies waters. Also if u see rubbish inside the rivers,lakes and oceans don’t walk past the problem.
For my final and last paragraph i am going to tell u about how water pollution start?Water pollution started when people made factories also farms. Both of these buildings started water pollution. First for the farm,The farmers buy chemicals to make the grass grow faster for the cows but what they don’t know is that when it rains the chemicals wish down to the rivers,lakes and oceans too. It make the water turn into something you won’t like to see with your eyes. Now for the factories the factories make different thing like plastic lunch boxes to big containers.
Thank you for reading my stories if you made it to the end. My stories was about water pollution,It was about water pollution because i think people can stop pouring oil and chemicals into the bodies waters also oceans,rivers and lakes. Plus not pouring anything down the drain and sink too.
Hey Tevita,
ReplyDeleteName's Von... I am a year 7 student from St Pius X school.
There are some really good detail's in your writing but next time add images that is suitable for your writing ....